"Along the river's stony marge A thousand lambs are on the rocks, That plaintive cry! which up the hill Comes from the depth of Dungeon-Ghyll." Need I mention the exquisite description of the Sea-Loch in THE BLIND HIGHLAND BOY? Who but a poet tells a tale in such language to the little ones by the fireside as― "Yet had he many a restless dream; Both when he heard the eagle's scream, Beside a lake their cottage stood, For to this lake, by night and day, And rivers large and strong: Then hurries back the road it came- As long as earth shall last. And, with the coming of the tide, And to the shepherds with their flocks Bring tales of distant lands."5 [Ib., iii., pp. 145-6. Mr. Wordsworth has altered "sweetly" in the I might quote almost the whole of his RUTH, but take the following stanzas: "But, as you have before been told, This Stripling, sportive, gay, and bold, The wind, the tempest roaring high, Whatever in those climes he found A kindred impulse, seemed allied Nor less, to feed voluptuous thought, The breezes their own languor lent; The stars had feelings, which they sent Yet in his worst pursuits, I ween, Pure hopes of high intent: For passions linked to forms so fair And stately, needs must have their share, Of noble sentiment." But from Mr. Wordsworth's more elevated compositions, last stanza to "safely." In the first I venture to prefer "the eagle's scream," which my father wrote, to "the eagles," as it is written by Mr Wordsworth-because eagles are neither gregarious nor numerous, and the first expression seems to mark the nature of the bird, and to bring it more interestingly before the mind, than the last. S. C.] [P. W., ii., p. 106. S. C.] which already form three-fourths of his works; and will, I trust, constitute hereafter a still larger proportion;-from these, whether in rhyme or blank verse, it would be difficult and almost superfluous to select instances of a diction peculiarly his own, of a style which cannot be imitated without its being at once recognised, as originating in Mr. Wordsworth. It would not be easy to open on any one of his loftier strains, that does not contain examples of this; and more in proportion as the lines are more excellent, and most like the author. For those, who may happen to have been less familiar with his writings, I will give three specimens taken with little choice. The first from the lines on the BoY OF WINANDER-MERE,—who "Blew mimic hootings to the silent owls, That they might answer him.-And they would shout Of mirth and jocund din!. And when it chanced, Of mountain-torrents; or the visible scene 8 7 [There was a Boy. P. W., ii., p. 79. S. C.] Mr. Wordsworth's having judiciously adopted concourse wild" in this passage for "a wild scene" as it stood in the former edition, encourages me to hazard a remark, which I certainly should not have made in the works of a poet less austerely accurate in the use of words, than he is, to his own great honor. It respects the propriety of the word "scene," even in the sentence in which it is retained Dryden, and he only in his more careless verses, was the first, as far as my researches have discovered, who for the convenience of rhyme used this word in the vague sense, which has been since too current even in our best writers, and which (unfortunately, I think) is given as its first explanation in Dr. Johnson's Dictionary, and therefore would be taken by an incautious reader as its proper sense. In Shakspeare and Milton the word is never used without Come clear reference, proper or metaphorical, to the theatre. Thus Milton; "Cedar, and pine, and fir, and branching palm A sylvan scene; and, as the ranks ascend Shade above shade, a woody theatre Of stateliest view." [Par. Lost, iv., l. 139. 8. C.] 9 Would enter unawares into his mind Its woods, and that uncertain heaven, received I object to any extension of its meaning, because the word is already more equivocal than might be wished; inasmuch as in the limited use which I recommend, it may still signify two different things; namely, the scenery, and the characters and actions presented on the stage during the presence of particular scenes. It can therefore be preserved from obscurity only by keeping the original signification full in the mind. Thus Milton again, -"Prepare thee for another scene."* 9 [Part of this poetical description has been altered or expanded thus; And they would shout Across the watery vale, and shout again, Of jocund din! And, when there came a pause I fear it is presumptuous even to express a feeling which hardly dares to be an opinion, about these fine verses (one of the most exquisite specimens of blank verse that I know, and fit to be placed beside the most exquisite specimens from Milton, though different from them in the kind of excellence) and yet I cannot forbear to express the feeling, that the latter part of this quotation stood better at first; or that any improvement,-if any there be,-in the first of the two altered lines, is dearly purchased by the comparative languor which has thus been occasioned in the second : Of silence such as baffled his best skill seems to me almost prose in comparison with That pauses of deep silence mocked his skill,— which presents the image (if so it may be called) at once without dividing it, while the spondaic movement of the verse corresponds to the sense. Neither can I think that "mirth" is here a superfluity even in addition to "jocund din ;" the logic of poetic passion may admit or even require what the mere logic of thought does not exact; and what is the objection to "chanc'd," which Milton uses just in the same way in Paradise Lost ?f The utter silence of the owls after such free and full communications, is [Par. Lost, xi., 1. 637 S. C.] † Book ix., 1. 575. The second shall be the noble imitation of Drayton (if it was not rather a coincidence) in the lines To JOANNA." -"When I had gazed perhaps two minutes' space, That ravishment of mine, and laughed aloud. Carried the lady's voice!—old Skiddaw blew And Kirkstone tossed it from his misty head!” The third, which is in rhyme, I take from the SONG AS THE FEAST OF BROUGHAM CASTLE, upon the restoration of Lord Clifford, the Shepherd, to the Estates and Honors of his Ancestors. 12 "Now another day is come, as good an instance of chance, or an event of which we cannot see the cause, as the affairs of this world commonly present; and the word seems to me particularly expressive. S. C.] 10 Which Copland scarce had spoke, but quickly every hill, In sailing to the sea, told it to Egremound, Whose buildings, walks, and streets, with echoes loud and long Did mightily commend old Copland for her song. Drayton's POLYOLBION: Song XXX. 12 [Ib., p 154. S. C.] 11 [P. W., ii., p. 299. S. C.] |