I stand in pause where I shall first begin, Were -Pray, I cannot Tho' inclination be as sharp as th’ill. Amidst this multitude of conjectures, I must own myself not satisfied. I think by one light addition we may greatly clear up the difficulty. The king, conscious of his own guilt, is defirous, yet afraid, to repent and pray: is it not natural that be Thould say ; A brother's murder-Pray, I (would, yet] cannot-Now this flight addition will explain the next puzzling line : let us consider, what we may reasonably expect him to have said after this : “ I wou'd pray, but I cannot, tho' my inclination, [my great defire] to do fo is no less powerful and persuasive with me, than the already determined resolution of my mind fo to do: that is, I am no less desirous to do what I would (namely, pray) and cannot, than I am refolv'd to do fo:" the seeming want of difference between inclination aid will, causes all the obscurity: if the reader attends to that, and observes, that by inclination he means, a longing desire, a disposition to do it with pleasure ; and by will, the determination of the mind, the actual resolution, I think all will be clear: and the words I have added in the foregoing line, if not genuine, (tho’ they seem to bid fair for it) at least add to the explaining the poet's thought. The lacter fine lines, Try what repentance can, what can it not ? Yet what can it, when one cannot repent? throw fome light on these in question : he could not pray, for his guilt defeated his intent : here he would try the force of allpowerful repentante,yet again is check'd by his guilty conscience: for tho', fays he, repentance can do all things, yet what can it do when one cannot really and truly use it when we are indeed desirous of repenting, but are by our guilt prevented from so doing: when we would fly to its aid, and be pardon’ù for our offence, and yet retain the offence itself, and beg for forgiveness, while we still are guilty the whole speech is a comment on itself. In Philafter, the king is praying to be forgiven,-tho' still rem taining his offence, as here : But how can I Were thicker than itself with brother's blood ? 2 [The King kucels Enter Hamlet. Ham. (29) Now might I do it pat, now he is pray ing; And now I'll do't, and so he goes to heaven, (29) It has been remarked, there is great want of resolution in Hamlet, for when he had so good an opportunity to kill his uncle and revenge his father, as here, he thuffles it off with a paltry excuse, and is afraid to do what he so ardently longs for: ths And so am I reveng'd ?--that would be scann'd SCENE X. Part of the Scene between Hamlet and his Mother. Queen. What have I done that thou dar'st wag thy tongue Ham. Such an act, The the observation may be confirmed from many other passages: in the next page, he himself observes, that all occasions do inform agains bim,and (pur bis dull revenge: but 'tis not my design in this work, to cnter into exact criticism on the characters. The very soul, and sweet religion makes Queen. Ah me, what act ! Ham. Look here, upon this picture, and on this ; like Mars, to threaten or command, Queen. O, Hamlet, speak no more; Enter 1 (30) A Station, &c.] The poet employs this word in a sense different from what it is generally used to signify : for it means here, an attitude, a silent posture, fixt deneaner of perfor, in opposition to an active behaviour. Theobald, 'Tis very probable Milton took the first hint of the following fine lines from the present passage : Like Maa's son he stood, Par. Loft, B. 5. 285. (21) Mildew'd ear.] Probably he alludes to Pharaoh's dream, Gen. xli. And he dreamed and behold feven ears of corn came up on one stalk rank and good: and behold seven thin ears and talled with the east wind, sprang up after them : and the thin ears de youred the rank and full ears. See v. 22. Enter Ghost. Ham. Save me, and hover o'er me with your wings, Queen. Alas! he's mad. you not come your tardy fon to chide Ghoft. Do not forget; this vifitation Ham. How is it with you, madam? Quecn. Alas! how is't with you? Start (32) Like life in excrements.] Shakespear very frequently calls the hair an excrement, that is, without life or sensation, and his meaning here is, Hainlet's surprize had such an effect on him,that his hairs, as if there was life in those excrementitious parts,started yp and stood on end. So, in Macbeth, And my fell of hair Wou'd at a dismal treatise rouse and stir As life were in't. My notes on this play have so much swelled under my hand, I am oblig'd to lay aside a design I had of giving the reader a transiation of the discourse between Hamlet and his mother, from Saxo Grammaticus, which is extremely fine,and will be no small amusement to the reader if he thinks proper to consult that historian; from whom Shakespear has taken the whole of Hambt's disguis’d madness; the scene before us; his friendship with Horatio ; the death of Polonius; his banishment into England; his return from thence, and killing the usurper:--The Gloft seems to have been his own invention. |